Ok, Abby what are you trying to say here? I suppose that the goal was to shorten the headline but all it did was confuse me. I would understand it better if it read: " Don't let your boyfriend squash independence" or "Don't let a boyfriend squash independence" or "Don't let boyfriend squash your independence". How hard would it have been to add that little "a" or "your"? I need a modifier, please.
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